tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post1146243136978809413..comments2023-12-31T16:21:50.498-05:00Comments on Enter The Door Within: Suspense Technique #4, Frustration. And the Winner is:WayneThomasBatsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15837713579691260482noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-26446654606518549302007-08-31T15:54:00.000-05:002007-08-31T15:54:00.000-05:00YAAAY!!! Congrats Pais Charos!!!YAAAY!!! Congrats Pais Charos!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-53321048897445153152007-08-31T11:54:00.000-05:002007-08-31T11:54:00.000-05:00Everyone, journey over to my blog. I am sporting ...Everyone, journey over to my blog. I am sporting a new blog template that Eve *hugs Eve* made for me! Isn't it GORGEOUS?!?!therosepatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04496063590229450356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-79791258252180215062007-08-30T20:59:00.000-05:002007-08-30T20:59:00.000-05:00Aravis - after all of that, do you think I would h...Aravis - after all of that, do you think I would have made it a happy ending? Muahaha<BR/><BR/>Patrick - Thanks! I still liked your entry a lot, is that part of an actual story you're writing? I'd love to read the rest of it!<BR/><BR/>Kare - Of course I'll show it to you! But nooo touchy...tee hee. MY Isle of Swords!therosepatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04496063590229450356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-3787687377731248112007-08-30T14:53:00.000-05:002007-08-30T14:53:00.000-05:00Great job Pais!!! Thank you also for your encourag...Great job Pais!!! Thank you also for your encouraging comments!!! Mr. Batson, thank you for all the writing tequniques as well!!!Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407566103942805535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-33715349073425990062007-08-29T22:38:00.000-05:002007-08-29T22:38:00.000-05:00Pais, you had me hoping, but the post office was c...Pais, you had me hoping, but the post office was closed. How cruel : )Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-5217131323905562062007-08-29T22:37:00.000-05:002007-08-29T22:37:00.000-05:00If anyone is interested, I've started a writing fo...If anyone is interested, I've started a writing forum. The purpose was to get a smaller group of writers who could be close-knit and constructive, unlike the mega forums you'll see on the internet. <BR/><BR/>http://fathoms.forumup.com/?mforum=fathomsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-10622071126276349932007-08-29T19:35:00.000-05:002007-08-29T19:35:00.000-05:00Pais! Congrats! Swing by my blog for more winnings...Pais! Congrats! Swing by my blog for more winnings!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15185060505158684073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-20119946080269354892007-08-29T15:40:00.000-05:002007-08-29T15:40:00.000-05:00Hmm, this is ironic, I just started archery today ...Hmm, this is ironic, I just started archery today at school...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-11103203076213526782007-08-29T15:38:00.000-05:002007-08-29T15:38:00.000-05:00Yay! *huggles Pais* That was awesome. :) And I'm ...Yay! *huggles Pais* That was awesome. :) And I'm sure everybody else did a great job, too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-37299397764070634502007-08-29T13:39:00.000-05:002007-08-29T13:39:00.000-05:00CONGRATS!!CONGRATS!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-1440704120058828162007-08-29T08:06:00.000-05:002007-08-29T08:06:00.000-05:00HOORAY PAIS!!! *rolls out a cannon and blasts co...HOORAY PAIS!!!<BR/><BR/> *rolls out a cannon and blasts confetti everywhere*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-66843306287673062612007-08-29T00:06:00.000-05:002007-08-29T00:06:00.000-05:00*shuffles feet* This is my first one since number ...*shuffles feet* This is my first one since number 4. I was just getting frustrated with the others. :)<BR/><BR/>Ah Isle of Swords for a birthday gift. And from the Capt'n too!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-14330376859366665902007-08-28T23:52:00.000-05:002007-08-28T23:52:00.000-05:00Hehe ... I need to write one for #6, but I can't c...Hehe ... I need to write one for #6, but I can't come up with anything.<BR/><BR/>You know, Wayne. This is ironic timing. My birthday is this coming Sunday.therosepatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04496063590229450356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-38568323285848339492007-08-28T23:50:00.000-05:002007-08-28T23:50:00.000-05:00I posted my first entry for #5. Finally....I posted my first entry for #5. Finally....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-17761710532650588472007-08-28T23:11:00.000-05:002007-08-28T23:11:00.000-05:00Marvelous job my dear! Bravo! You'll have to show ...Marvelous job my dear! Bravo! <BR/><BR/>You'll have to show me the prize next we meet.Hollihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05969383837669027587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-30853073005536389342007-08-28T22:42:00.000-05:002007-08-28T22:42:00.000-05:00*blushes* Thanks guys, I'm flattered :D Patrick ....*blushes* Thanks guys, I'm flattered :D Patrick ... I really thought you were going to win, bro. I loved your entry!therosepatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04496063590229450356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-92159084781343726092007-08-28T22:39:00.000-05:002007-08-28T22:39:00.000-05:00that's awsomeful PaisY! *Tackle huggles*Good job!that's awsomeful PaisY! *Tackle huggles*<BR/>Good job!Roherynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12075440685837170776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-48702868275870970622007-08-28T22:05:00.000-05:002007-08-28T22:05:00.000-05:00Pais congrats! Talk about a time crunch.Pais congrats! Talk about a time crunch.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-21273983665780482322007-08-28T20:27:00.000-05:002007-08-28T20:27:00.000-05:00Yay! Go Pais! I loved your entry. My hearty was ne...Yay! Go Pais! I loved your entry. My hearty was nearly nailing against my chest, as I read your entry! Awesome stuff!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11767924119613122471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-54960652946248849512007-08-28T20:25:00.000-05:002007-08-28T20:25:00.000-05:00Huzzah! Congrats Pais! *bows with a flourish* It i...Huzzah! Congrats Pais! *bows with a flourish* It is well deserved indeed!everlastingscribehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390789953931295135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-78465151693102800482007-08-28T19:55:00.000-05:002007-08-28T19:55:00.000-05:00I'm ... I'm stunned. Thank you!! I ... wow, didn...I'm ... I'm stunned. Thank you!! I ... wow, didn't think I'd actually win this one. :D<BR/><BR/>*gets hit with a sudden realization* <I>Isle of Swords</I> will now be MINE!! Haha! Without the arrow stuck in it.... Thank you Wayne!!therosepatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04496063590229450356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-34304684730906504012007-08-28T18:55:00.000-05:002007-08-28T18:55:00.000-05:00Congrats Pais ... well doneCongrats Pais ... well doneJoshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17197032654676365547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19752207.post-21641015808436675942007-08-28T18:48:00.000-05:002007-08-28T18:48:00.000-05:00Congratulations Pais!I loved the time aspect and h...Congratulations Pais!<BR/><BR/>I loved the time aspect and how you let the character, and therefore, the reader, see the time as it passed. By the end it's a desperate situation, that is very frustrating. Great Job!<BR/><BR/>Wayne - thanks for the honorable mention. This was a fun one. Tormenting the characters is pretty fun in a sadistic sort of way. :)Amy Browninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00980921368244489071noreply@blogger.com